Thursday, 28 August 2008

3 WORD WEDNESDAY C1 ...

Traveled

Desperate

Lapse

I so want to make these three words into a Haiku. Yet no matter which way I position them they don't quite say what I mean ...

Traveled a desperate lapse ... I have for the past 20 weeks ...

A desperate lapse traveled with me ... that too ...

A lapse too traveled became desperate ... Mmmm ...

The traveled, desperate, lapse diminished ...

Resurgance propells me from a well traveled, desperate, lapse!

... if you get what I mean ...

7 Comments:

paisley said...

damn those 5-7-5 syllable constraints!!!!!!

Lucy said...

great job Red!
I was just reading a comment you recently left me, You are always so kind! :)

pjd said...

uh... nope, I think you lost me.

anthonynorth said...

Well, I can't fault you for effort :-)
I fail with haiku nearly every time. I've a phobia concerning formula poetry - I'm sure of it.

susan said...

I see no lapse in your creativity here. Appreciate you allowing me to travel this road with you. Nothing desperate in this attempt that I can see. ;-)

gautami tripathy said...

You did good here!

Write away, woman!

OneMoreBeliever said...

yeah, what susan sed... a rather delightful journey through the looking glass.. did you try the big pill first or the small pill?

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